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[Lulanda Demo 2]

The UI and graphics look truly excellent in this game.

However, your storytelling is a little too deliberate. It would be easily possible to let novice gamers understand the principle of the game without the need for expository dialogue like that.

This very good article talks about some stuff like that: http://www.gamasutra.com/view/feature/3408/the_cabal_valves_design_process_.php

WilliamPellen responds:

Thanks for the link! I erred on the simpler side because it's just a demo, and normally a few levels would come before it that would introduce mechanics a bit more organically. It is definitely something that's tricky to balance!