The UI and graphics look truly excellent in this game.
However, your storytelling is a little too deliberate. It would be easily possible to let novice gamers understand the principle of the game without the need for expository dialogue like that.
This very good article talks about some stuff like that: http://www.gamasutra.com/view/feature/3408/the_cabal_valves_design_process_.php
Thanks for the link! I erred on the simpler side because it's just a demo, and normally a few levels would come before it that would introduce mechanics a bit more organically. It is definitely something that's tricky to balance!
Good style, but the gameplay itself is a little weak. Too much time goes by without much going on. I couldn't figure out what to do after I got the flashlight and USB.
Glitched out on first pet
A very well made game but I would like more story.
Joined on 4/7/13
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